Deep Dark
In open country street lamps are doused. There are only ocean and mountains respectively, one a darker ridge against black, the other a song of in-out rolled on shore. She's in her black period -...
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Great job with the imagery... a poignant piece that shows that the core of often less glitzy. Nicely done
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Hi 510camelions, I like this view of a person in the "deep dark". So many of us hide inner grief with glitter on the outside. The backdrop of the landscape serves as a miror reflecting the woman's...
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Oh how we hide our true selves...enjoyed this ....our face and demeaner often shine bright when we are often at our 'darkest'...we mourn and hold our pain to ourselves...and let others think we are...
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Thanks for your comments, and for giving this such a good read. I think I have edited this since I posted it. There's something not quite right about the way it reads here. I'll come back later and...
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I do like this. I wanted something besides fireflies. Something a bit more original.
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And also, while I like this, but the word "respectfully" reduced it to a business letter. I think it's more effective without that word.
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